my mobile

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4 Responses to my mobile

  1. cspencer says:

    2 lines and no images? Not acceptable for a Year 5 piece of home learning.

  2. Liam Y5 says:

    A very good start to your poem.

  3. Polina says:

    really its empty but please add pictures to make it catchy

  4. castv says:

    really empty but its a good poem !Try and add pictures if you can!

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