the cricket bat

Posted on November 27, 2018 by Deleted User
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3 Responses to the cricket bat

  1. cspencer says:
    November 27, 2018 at 12:02 pm

    Personification, rhyme and expanded noun phrases are all evident within your observation poem. Well done!

  2. REY Y5⚽️⚽️⚽️ says:
    November 27, 2018 at 12:06 pm

    Great affects really eyecatching affects ARE REALLY BRIGHT AND INVITING

  3. Liam Y5 says:
    November 27, 2018 at 12:08 pm

    Cool rhymes

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