I really like the similes you used
I liked your use of rhyme a lot and how well it is describing the calculator!
short, but good example for the class
Very good example of what to do for our homelearning
I really like the rhyming and as you are a teacher, thank you for telling us what do do when you are stuck during the process of doing your homework!!
Excellent poetry technique spot Adelina! Can you think of your own two line stanza to continue the poem …
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I really like the similes you used
I liked your use of rhyme a lot and how well it is describing the calculator!
short, but good example for the class
Very good example of what to do for our homelearning
I really like the rhyming and as you are a teacher, thank you
for telling us what do do when you are stuck during the
process of doing your homework!!
Excellent poetry technique spot Adelina! Can you think of your own two line stanza to continue the poem …